nice, shit, i like the flow on this one
good delivery and punches
good luck wit ya CD
yo good lyrics , nice flow and beat
just work on ya delivery
as always i love ur beats ,
i 5d it
4.26 / 5.00 (+ 0.016)
Not bad , i like it
this aint bad , illl verse
yo spawn we havent talked in mad long
but thiz shit is prettty good
u stepping it up , flow isnt perfected yet but its improving, good lyrics
i like the quotes, delivery isnt bad either , yo
3.21 / 5.00
U cudve done so muuuchh better
yo i dont get it
whyd raccoon give u a 10
and then say u were garbage like WTF ?
n um this needs work , with ya flow
it cudve been so mmuch better ,but not bad i reccomend u redo it
dude it's 10 minute work, I dun see the point in redoing it, I'll just make a new 1 n spend some more time on it.
Keep it pimpin'
GOOD SHIT STEPPING IT UP, keep up ya flow n shit n good lyricz ,
lol i got em crying
Got ma 10
nasty shit love both dem moviezzz....... good mix kidd
IM Sorry , STEP YA GAME UP OR QUIT
yo if i cud give u a negative i wud but 0 is the lowest.
first off, voice mad annoying, flow is a off, lyrics thaz wher i lost all respect 4 u, ur lyrics have no punches, u use pre-k vocabulary 2nd grade in some parts, ur structure iss off , some of it doesnt even make sense, "some shit abotut u jingling ya keys " and u turn the block , idk maybe iz me cuz i cudnt understand all of wat u said, the hook is mmmadd annoying, im sorry this is shit.
peace , SeRAPhic
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